Monday, 24 June 2013

My hollwen story

One Halloween my friends and I were going trick-or-treating in our neighbourhood. Down the street from us was an old deserted house that everyone thought was haunted. My mother said, "Don't you dare go near that house!" Naturally, her warning made us even more curious. We went to the house and rang the bell. There was no answer. We tried the door. It was unlocked, so we entered the house. The door slammed shut behind us and....... Then the darkness crowded around us. Then sounds that were never heard before got louder and closer. Eyes appeared from dark corners. Shadows closed in on us. Terrible noises came from dark scary places. My friends and I followed a voice to a door at the end of the haunted houses hallway. Then we all stopped with fright from the top of our heads to the tip of our toes. Our teeth shook making chattering sounds. We all felt unsafe. But what we hadn't read was the sign outside that said “Beware! enter if you dare!
if you  enter you must  take the risk of your life to get out”

Friday, 14 June 2013


Long ago there lived a girl name Cinderella Cinderella was kind smart  and beautiful.
When Cinderella had a happy life  Then one day Cinderella’s mother pass away  soon after Cinderella’s father married  another woman how had two daughters of her own.
Cinderella's stepmother and stepsister were never were kind to her.
The stepmother gave her daughters lollies and dollies fancy dresses and wonderful toys and she gave Cinderella nothing
Sadly Cinderella’s father passed away too and  Cinderella was left  in the large house with her stepmother  with lollie and dollie.
Cinderella’ life was awful the stepmother made cinderella  a servant in her own home
Cinderella had to rise early every morning and spend each day making meals scrubbing the floor doing the dishes and taking orders from lollie and dollie
Cinderella’s stepmother even made her sleep on the kitchen floor next to the fireplace which was filled of dust and  cinder thats why  she was called Cinderella.
Cinderella’s clothes were tatty and her face was smudged  with cinder but Cinderella had a  cheerful heart lollie and dollie tested her all the time
our clothes look like dirty diapers lollie would shriek
Your face look’s like a bucket of  mud dollie would say
Then they would pop Chocolates into your mouth and watches as Cinderella scrubs the floor Lottie and dottie were as ugly as in the inside as well and the outside One day  a page from the castle arrived  at the house with an  invitation  the page from the castle said that  the prince will be holding  a grand Ball in three nights he is hoping to find a bride ever young woman in the kingdom shall come and meet the prince
Lottie and dottie were very excited to meet the prince
I’m going to marry the prince said dottie why would a prince marry you said Lottie you look like a rotten potato  Lottie and dottie were just about to get into a fight when Cinderella asked can i go to the ball Lottie and dottie looked at her and began to laugh they laughed harder and harder and harder they laughed so hard that they fell onto the ground and rolled you can meet the prince as she laughed your clothes look like dirty diapers and your face said dottie gasping as she giggled it looks like a bucket of mud  Girls said the stepmother of course Cinderella may go to the ball if she finishes all her jobs all day Cinderella had to scrub and tidy  she had no time to make a dress the next day  Cinderella’s stepmother gave her a even longer list but cinderella didn’t do it at went to the ball

Thursday, 13 June 2013

State Assets

Last night on Wednesday 12 June 2013 the protest was on Taniwha St.
There were so many people at the protest  i wasn't there but i have some friends that were there .
They were existed then they said the most funniest thing was when the camera crew showed protesters were as loud as animals at the zoo.

Then i never thought that what she was tell me was true but then i watch the new and i saw her on the channel three.
The next day  i said to her  “ so you really are telling the truth” i told her then i said “ because i saw you on the channel three news !” .
We were screaming with excitement everyone came over to us and said  “ what's the great news?”
I screamed my best friend was on the T.V channel three.
And that is why i am always with her wherever she goes in Glen Innes