Goldilocks

 Today I went onto sunshine online and read a story called goldilocks and i was about when goldilocks was taking a walk through the forest when she found a cottage and the door was wide open and so she walked inside and found three porridge  blows and she one big one one medium and one small goldilocks tried the big blow but it was to hot so she tried the medium blow but it was to cold then she tired the small blow and it was just right then she felt tired so then she sat one the big chair but was to hard then she sat one the medium one but it was to soft then she sat on the small one and it was just right but then i broke then she felt tired so the she went up into the bed room's and then she saw the bed's she layed on the big bed but it was to hard the she layed on the medium bed but it was to soft then she layed on the small bed and it was just right and it was so comfortable that she fell asleep and then went three bears came home they were asking themselves "who's been eating my porridge who's been sitting in my chair " and poor baby bear said "all my porridge is gone and my chair is broken and then they all went upstairs and the saw that Goldilocks was still in baby bear bed and then goldilocks woke up and saw three bears and screamed and ran and didn't stop until she got home.

http://www.sunshineonline.com.au